There are so many possibilities when considering a fictional world. If you could choose any of these seven to live in, which one would you choose and why? How does it unfold?
Short description of each place:
Narnia: Magical world in the Chronicles of Narnia book series where ordinary kids become prince and princesses and the king, who they try to save, is a talking lion.
Neverland: The land where Peter Pan brings three kids from England. In Neverland you don’t have to grow up and have responsibilities, you can play and dress up forever. The only downside is the evil Captain Hook.
Wonderland: The dream land where Alice lands when she falls down the rabbit hole. Wonderland is filled with talking animals and flowers, a disappearing cheshire cat, a mad hatter, and a queen of hearts who tries to get rid of Alice.
Hogwarts: The school for wizards and witches in Harry Potter where Harry faces the struggle between good and evil and has many adventures with his friends, Ron and Hermione.
Camelot: Is the castle and court associated with King Arthur. It is a place where knights are deemed nobles and princesses are to be saved.
Middle Earth: The continent in which the Lord of the Rings takes place. The hobbits, men, elves, and valar are on the good side while Melkor along with the orcs and dragons are evil.
Westeros: The continent in which Game of Thrones takes place. It is ruled by a single political party known as the Seven Kingdoms.
The Seven Doors
I would pick middle earth because I would see old people fight, Bilbo Baggins and Smegul.
As I stepped through the door I had seen Bilbo Baggins tripping then falling down a flight of stairs. I went to go help him up. When I got there Bilbo had broken his only pipe he said “I need a new pipe made from a special wood from Mordor” I replied “That will take a week or so”. So I went and started a simple walk to get some wood for Bilbo. As I was walking I noticed I was being followed from a very old man I turned around and said “why are you following me”? He replied “I want to show you the way to Mordor” “What’s Your Name” I replied. “Gandalf… Gandalf the Grey” I said “nice to meet you I am Sidney”. So as we were walking through the woods we had fight off orcs and some other things I can’t even name. When we passed a Castle we see. It was getting attacked by giant trees and two hobbits. Gandalf yelled “There’s The Tree”! I replied “well lets go get a branch”. When we got back to The Shire we gave Bilbo his wood for his pipe. He thanked me and Gandalf so much for getting him wood to fix his pipe! The End
If I had to choose between these seven doors I would choose the door leading to Hogwarts. The reason I would choose it is because I would like to practice magic. I also think it would make for an adventurous life with no dull moments.
As soon as I enter the door I find myself in a booth of a train. I look around, curious of where I am. I notice a window, covered by red curtains. Pulling the curtains apart, I see a vast, green, natural landscape covered in vegetation. I glance outside of my booth to see a snack cart being pushed along. As I look through its contents, I realize that it is full of items I have never heard of, like “all” flavoured jellybeans. When the cart is pushed to me, the lady pushing the cart asks if I would like anything. I answer back; saying no, shy of its strange contents.
Finally, the train comes to a complete stop after traveling for what seems like hours. When I exit the train I find a huge school that could be none other than Hogwarts. As all of us students are ushered into the school, I notice that I am now wearing a school uniform that was not on me before. A teacher instructed us to head to the dining hall so we could have our opening feast. Two large tables full of plates and cutlery sat in the massive dining hall. I took a seat at the end of the table to my right beside a young man about my age. An old man sitting at a table full of teachers introduces himself as Dumbledore and welcomes everyone to a brand new school year. After he finishes talking he shouts, “Let’s feast!” and food suddenly appears on the plates in front of us.
After we have all eaten to the point that we feel like we could explode, we are told to leave the dining hall. After leaving, all students line up to put on a magic hat that tells us which quarters we sleep in judging by our personalities. After my turn ends I walk to my quarters. As I walk, I am amazed by the discovery of staircases that can move and paintings that can talk and see. I finally find my quarters and choose a bed. I yawn after a long day of discovering new things. I finally get to wind down.
The 7 Doors
If I to choose between the 7 doors, I would go to Wonderland. I would pick the door because Wonderland is a very interesting place. Animals and plants can talk to you, you can shrink and grow in size, meet characters like the Cheshire Cat, the Mad Hatter, the Queen of Hearts and a hare the is always late. Wonderland seems very adventurous.
I am falling. I don’t know where, all I remember I opening a door and stepping through the door and I suddenly fall. It is pitch black and I can’t tell how long I have been falling but it seems like years. I feel something sticky on my clothes and skin. Cobwebs! I start to think what is at the end of this hole. I feel like Alice in Alice in Wonderland! All of a sudden I land on solid ground. Sharp pains run through my body as I stand up. I looked at my surroundings. A little light lit up the little room. Something caught my eye. A small door was at the other end of the room. It was way too small for me to fit in through. I walked cautiously to the small door and tried opening the door with the tiny doorknob. The door opened and caught me by surprise. I peered through the door and saw greenery and sunshine. I was really tempted to go through the door. I looked around and saw a little glass that was filled with a pink liquid. I walked up to the table and picked up the glass. A little tag wrapped around the glass read Drink Me. I thought in my mind what kind of consequences would come with me drinking this. I decided to give it a chance. I gulped down the liquid and I felt my mouth tingling. All of a sudden I shot down to the ground. I looked at myself, I had shrunk! I still had clothes on; at least they shrunk into size with me. I ran to the door and slowly walked out. Flowers sprang up everywhere, birds chirping, the sun literally smiling down at me. Wait the sun had a smile?! I looked around and all the flowers had faces too. I cautiously walked down the path. “Who is she?” a yellow flower whispered, but loud enough for me to hear. I felt slightly embarrassed. I had walked through a door without even thinking about what was outside of it! I kept walking down the path, ignoring the fact that flowers and all sorts of creatures were giving me looks. I ended up at a fork at the path. A tree right in the middle was separating the paths. “Hello” a deep but calm voice started to talk. “Um Hello? Who’s there?” I said in a shaky voice. Suddenly a face appeared on top of the tree. A big cheesy smile looked down at me. His eyes were shifting around and suddenly a purple striped cat came along with the face. “I’m the Cheshire Cat” he explained. “Would you like to pass?’ “Yes I would” I tried to sound mature and important. “If you go to the right you might not make it through the day. The left might lead you somewhere more pleasant.” the Cheshire cat hissed his words to me. “Okay thank you” I replied. I started walking again, humming lightly to myself, enjoying the scenery. I stumbled upon a table with a young man that looked a little out of place. “Excuse me, where am I actually going?” I asked. The young man almost fell out of his chair. “I’m sorry; I didn’t mean to startle you.” It’s okay.” The young man had crazy, wild, red hair with a top hat. “Would you like to join us for tea?” I’m sorry but I really should get going.” I replied back. Suddenly the teapot started to shake and a little mouse popped out. I was speechless and didn’t know what to do for a moment and with my instincts I started to run away. I don’t know why but it seemed like the right thing to do. I started to slow my running and in the distance I saw a castle. A white and red castle gleaming in the sunlight. I was really close to the castle when I heard a voice that started talking to me. “You shouldn’t go there.” The cheesy smile popping up in the air. Why should I listen to you?” I replied. The cat disappeared before I could get an answer. I walked closer to the castle and suddenly a rolled up hedgehog landed right in front of me. It came from the back so I dodged the hedgehog and went around the castle. I turned the corner and what my eyes saw was unbelievable! A small queen with short red hair was shouting at cards. Yes, cards dressed like guards. I saw that the queen was playing a game of croquet. The croquet sticks were flamingos and the croquet balls were rolled up hedgehogs like the one that had landed in front of me earlier. The queen was shouting at the guards when she stopped and glared at me. “Who are you?” she shouted. She was small but had a loud voice. “I don’t even know where I am.” I explained to the queen. ‘Seize her!” she shouted at her guards. I braced myself and suddenly I shot up straight in my bed. It had all been a dream. A crazy dream.
Kailey, I like your story,it was really long and very interesting. God job. 🙂
Chackie I liked your story it has a good story line its just confusing you just needed to add more detail not just “he did this, then that”.
hey kailey great story, i really liked the beginning, but i think i would have been cool if you added more to the 2 days at the end
Angels Wish
If I were to choose between the seven doors I would pick never land. I would pick this door because in never land you never grow up, and with fairy dust pirates and Indians. It also has mermaids (I know how to drown a mermaid). Another reason is because I want to go hunt peter pan down. you can fly. I also would pick this because it has
I awoke in a dark cavern unaware of how I had gotten there. Behind me was darkness ahead was seven doors carved into stone. Realizing that the doors were my only hope I briskly walked through the middle one.
It was three seconds to impact. 1 my body was sent hurling from the stone 2 the momentum slowed and my decent began 3 my body shattered the calm water like a stone on a sheet of glass, the roar of crashing waves pounding me as my senses dimmed and my lunges burned. I tried to swim up but something on my back was holding me down, pulling me back into the dark pool. Randomly clawing with my hand I hoped for something to grip. Just as my lungs felt like they were going too exploded my left hand broke free of water and grabbed something and using it as a hold I pulled myself out of the water. Taking deep shaky breaths I looked around and took in my surroundings. To my left was a rock, most likely the rock I had fell from before almost drowning. The rock was shaped like a skull with the water carving out two circles a triangle and a half oval making a face-like appearance. To my right was a cave and underneath me was a small platform barely jutting out of the ocean. I sighed as a dark cloud came over me shading my flesh from the suns hot grasp, protecting me from burning. Looking at the rock I saw that carved into the nose of the skull-rock was the same door I had walked into. I turned back to the cave and plunging back into the waters I was glad I had taken swimming lessons. The process was painfully slow, the same resisting force on my back pulling me away. By the time I had reached the shore in the cave the sun had set. I knew I had to sleep because tomorrow I would look for civilization. I closed my eyes and after what seemed like an eternity I slowly drifted to sleep.
The sun woke me up. God I thought who left my blinds opened; I stopped thinking, the events of yesterday sinking in. oh right. I sat up my stomach growling, well better go get food. I stepped out of the cave and stretched my arms. Wow this place looks great in the day I thought as a shadow of a giant bird came over me , I turned around looking to see if a giant killer bird was attacking me, but by the time I had turned around the creature was gone , that’s odd I thought were is the bird. I scratched my back in confusion but stopped, for protruding out of my back between my shoulder blades were two giant pearl white wings the slender feathers still damp from the swim. Hmm I thought well I have wings might as well try to use them. Climbing up to the top of the skull rock as I had come to call I jumped and tried to spread my wings to no prevail. Well let’s work on moving them before I go on another death plunge I though as I crawled onto the sandy beach. I stood up and shook the water falling from my wings. When they were dry I worked on Making them move, up down in out, I did this for hours until the sun disappeared again and my exhaustion took over. I awoke with a hunger and a thirst. Luckily yesterday I had managed to get off the ground for a few seconds. Climbing back onto the top of the skull I jumped and flapped my new found wings, I gasped as my body lifted over the cave and, my wings stopped and I plummeted to the top of the cave, I screamed to no avail but I heard something else move in the water as I hit the ground and darkness took over.
“God he’s a heavy sleeper”
“I know it’s been what 10 hours”
“Yeh c’mon lets go get him some food.”
“Right” splash
I awoke slowly, my conscience slipping in and out as three female voices talked over me.
“Wah” I gasped
“Eeeeeeeek” “he’s finally awake.
“Cool”
“Oh shut up Aqua”
“Lenia don’t be a Whale”
“s’cuse me Hellina”
I backed away from the three voices going underneath the hole in which my body had come crashing down from above
“Girls he’s gone, the Angels gone” the voice called Aqua whispered, “Find Him!” the voices stopped and were replaced with a quite slithering sound. I saw the first girl most likely Aqua come into the light from the hole. She was slender and seemly tall but her legs were hidden still in the shadows, her skin was a pale opal color, and her eyes a deep blue like the ocean. Her hair fell just past her shoulder a blonde color with blue jutting out from her scalp. My eyes stopped almost bulging out when I saw her legs, were they should have started, instead protruded a slim reptilian tail ending with a fin. She must have caught me staring for she asked
“What’s wrong? Hmm”
“N-n-nothing” I stuttered out “just a little rattled, that’s all”
“Good “she replied seemly threating me.
“So” I said remembering her remark about mistaking me as an Angel. “If you help Angel you get a wish”
“I know” she replied with a smirk, “That’s what I was counting on”
“Oh well since you and your friend help me after my fall, what’s your wish?” I asked just as the other two entered the light, one most likely Lenia Was normal a tall girl, except for her hues. Her entire body was an ever changing blue and her hair green as seaweed. The other girl, the third was the most surprising. She was tall, as all of them were but her skin snow white and lips blood red contrasting with the midnight black hair, Poking out of it was two Curled horns, and protruding from her back in the same place as mine were two leathery wings. How odd I though, a mermaid, a water nymph and a faerie.
“Our wish is…. Kill the Indian chief”.
“Excuse me?”
“I said Kill the Indian chief.”
“Oh well.” I stopped, thinking WTH I can’t kill a dude “s-sure j-just three things “I managed to get out as my stutter reappeared. “Were does he live, what does he look like and with what.”
“He lives on the plateau” said Aqua
“Yeh and he’s the one in the big fur coat!” Piped up a voice, my head spun in its direction. It was Lenia the nymph.
“You can use my sword or bow” said the last voice who I knew must be Hellina’s
“I’ll take the sword thanks”. I replied ‘but if you have weapons why not kill him yourself?”
“Because only Angels and Demons can kill Gods’’ said Lenia
“Right” I said “then I better be going” and before any could reply I flew out of the cave
God I thought what have I got myself into. I’ve got three mythical creatures counting on me to kill a god. “Wait I can go home right now ”I yelled clapping my hand over my mouth hopping the girls wouldn’t hear. Smiling I flew silently towards the rock. When I landed on it I realized something, I wasn’t that good of a flyer. Faltering on the rock I almost fell in had it not been for my strange talent at flying. I took a deep breath in as I had done on my first day here, I made a promise and if I died keeping it so be it. With a jolt I flew towards the plateau.
As I came nearer I saw what Lenia had meant by “fur coat”. On the chieftain was a 15 foot long bear pelt, stranger still was the fact that it was at least 5 feet of the ground. What the girls had neglected to tell me was that the chieftain was a 20 foot tall Hercules. “Oh Crap” i murmured. “I am screwed”. And with that I plunged. Something else that was forgotten was that he can hear a pin drop and react even faster. I wasn’t even 5 feet away when a club came crashing into my head. My body was sent reeling from the impact towards the cliff. I crashed on the side almost falling off. as the shadow of the club came over me I used my last strength to throw the sword in its direction, the hilt left my hand just as the weight of wood bashed my skull in.
50 feet in the sky a small figure was watching the combat. He smiled as the sword came at the chieftain, almost cheering, but cringed as the sword was deflected and the boy crushed. The small figure got up and, chanting jumped off the cloud.
The figure landed silently beside the broken skeleton, invisible and small. Still chanting it laid its palms on the chest, or what was left of it and as it did a golden hue passed between the figure and the body. When the hue had died out the now visible figure plunged into the waiting sea.
I awoke a golden hue around me, my wings an orange gold. A new sword in my hand and a halo at my head, smiling I charged at the chieftain. He saw me coming and swung around.
“Hah back for more? He boasted “no mortal can kill me
“Well it’s a good thing I’m no mortal” I said as my sword plunged deep into his heart.
When he crumpled I pulled my sword out of him and having fulfilled my promise to the three, I dissipated into the air.
Wonderland
If I could pick from the seven choices I would pick wonderland. It’s the most describable. I would fall down a rabbit hole shrink down to a small size to fit through the door. Talk to plants and animals, go to a tea party with a disappearing Cheshire cat, a mad hatter, a hare that is always late. Meet the queen of hearts paints roses with her and much more.
My point of view-
I’m falling and falling no words can describe how terrified I am. The only thing I can think about is what lies beneath this old abandoned rabbit hole. I was sitting in our garden and followed this hare that seemed to be mumbling “oh I’m late SOO late”. He ventured down the exact same hole I am now falling to my death in.
Hares point of view-
Yes it worked I got her to follow me. I have been trying for weeks now to get her attention to follow me down the secret portal way to wonderland she is the only one that can stop the red queen from taking away our freedom
My point of view-
I landed with a thud I’m covered in cob webs and dirt. The room I landed in has seven doors and a table with one key. I sat up and went over and picked up the key trying it in each door it finally clicked and creaked open I stepped in and all around me was trees soaring above me flowers and a bright blue sky with a path that sit beneath the blue canopy . I followed the single path until I came across a Grande tea party several figures sat around the table. A man with a top hat, a smiling cat and the hare that got me stuck in this mess.
Mad Hatters point of view-
The queen of hearts is now taking over our land it’s been several months before we found out that the little girl now standing in front of us can stop the queen and win back out freedom. I stood up first and greeted her with a bow she giggled and smiled back. The cat got up second and gave her a wide smile that made her freeze in place. She shook it off and stared at the hare that brought her here.
Several hours later
My point of view –
The whole thing has been explained to me while I was sipping on some tea and eating cookies. I’m supposed to destroy the queen of hearts to win back freedom in their land. What am I going to do they didn’t say whether or not I was supposed to make her vanish, fall to her death, poison her so much is going through my head now what am I going to do…
Days later
My point of view-
The days have passed I am sick to my stomach today is the day I win back there land. Coming face to face with the cruel queen of hearts makes me want to get rid of her faster. I raise my metal object above my head and chant some words and she is gone.
Wonderland
For my door I would go through the door that leads to wonderland. I picked this this door because wonderland seems like a cool place to go to. Not that much bad stuff could happen since the red hearts queen is already in jail and same with her little side kick. The jaberwakie is already dead and Alice could protect me if I met her. I love the movie I think it’s full of adventure. I like a lot of the characters too like the twins (those two are so funny), the little mouse (what is with her and taking animals eyes out), the bunny with the watch, the flying/ disappearing cat, both queens (the only reason I like both queens is because without one of them there wouldn’t be that much of a story and that bad queen is hilarious), that huge creature that was on the bad side I’ll just call it a dog, there is the mad hatter and the hare oh my gosh “ your late for tea” so funny like what is his problem, and of course Alice what would it be without Alice. I also picked this door because I would still be able to go home and there’s a great adventure in wonderland, it’s a big place so there’s lot’s to do and explore.
I’m in a room with 7 doors I pick a door and go through it. When I’m in the room everything’s a blur there’s a bright light shining in my face and for a while all I see is white and then I hear someone or some people saying things.
“You brought the wrong one”
“No I didn’t just give her some time to adjust”.
All of a sudden I can see again that white light that was in my face was indeed the sun. I see people no animals wait people and animals, talking animals. I can see a tiny mouse a bunny with a watch flowers with faces two twin boys.
“Where am I”?
“Told you, you brought the wrong…”
“Did not, you’re in wonderland, does anyone know where Alice is”?
“Wait I’m in wonderland like the wonder land from the movies Alice in wonderland”.
Everyone looked at me with puzzled faces all of a sudden the ground started shaking following with the sound of a giant stepping on the ground one step at a time, then out of no where a girl siting on a big creature or a dog with white and black circles on it popped out of the bushes.
“I’m here and yes you are in the movie but this movie is a real movie everything that happened in that movie happened here”
“For real”?
“For real, sorry I’ve been rode I’m Alice”.
“I’m Kailey, Kailey Somerville it’s an honor to be here Alice”
“Were late, late, late, were all late”. The bunny with the watch said.
“Hey I remember you from the movie always saying your late but what can we possible be late for because common this is totally a dream”.
“It’s not a dream” Alice said
“Awesome I’m in the real Alice in wonderland” I said.
“Yes but here please just call it wonderland, now climb aboard”
“You must be crazy wont that thing hurt me”.
“That thing is my dog”
“Ok won’t that dog hurt me he was once on the bad side…?”
“Once he was once on the bad side”.
She cut me off feeling sad for what I just had said I climbed aboard the huge dog or at least what Alice called the huge dog. He started to leave and I held on for dear life as he jumped high for every leap he took.
“Where are we going” I asked still humiliated by what I had said.
“To the castle of course” she said.
“You guys have a castle oh wait there’s two castles oh my god what castle are we going to I swear I haven’t done anything bad”.
“Are you crazy were the good team we live in the white castle not the red one and besides the red castle has been deserted for years and all her men have become good and are now all on our side”.
Time went by so fast just talking that we were there it felt like the ride was 10 seconds long. When the big dog finally came to a halt the white queen came to us.
“Hello your majesty I’m Kailey Somerville” I said and then bowed before her.
“Oh please no bows, Alice have you showed her around the kingdom yet”.
I got up from my bow and started to listen.
“No not yet I was thinking of maybe getting her a change of clothes”.
As she said this I glanced down at what I was wearing not realizing it at the time before I was still in my night gown.
“Yes that might be a good Idea”. The queen said
“Oh no please I don’t need a change of clothes I’m fine wearing this”.
She gave me a dirty look and then looked at me with this sad face I couldn’t resist
“But if it’s ok with you if you can find something that might fit me I’ll wear it but I don’t possible think that you’ll find something that will fi…….”
This man came with this beautiful outfit it looked like it was made from sliver but I knew it was just the cloth.
“Hear you go” the man said
“You don’t possible think this will fit me I usually have to try on at least 10 outfits and then I’ll finally find someth…”
“Try it on, I believe it will fit” the queen said
“Alice show Kailey the bathroom and when you’re done show her around the castle and her room have fun”
Me and Alice walked up the long walkway to the palace doors.
“Wait did she say my room”
“Yes”
“Oh I’m not staying”
“Well why not almost 2 weeks here is only 5 hours in your time”
“oh well I guess I’ll stay for two weeks or more or less I’m not sure what I’ll do”
“It’s ok do not decide now this is your first day and for the rest of today after you try this on I’m going to show you around the castle and outside of the castle the good and the bad things”
“In the movie this place is huge are we walking there”?
“Of course not silly were going to take my dog, I know you don’t really like him or your scared of him either way he can perfect us easily are you with me”
She stopped and pointed to a door.it was the bathroom door we were here all ready.
“Yes I’m with you I’ll do whatever I need to do to stay alive”
I walked into the bathroom I turned around and started to close the door and she said
“Oh yeh and if you die you’ll be dead you won’t spawn in your house you’ll be dead forever”.
I shut the door and I thought about what she had said long and hard before putting on the outfit and leaving the safe castle to go outside and Alice give me a tour around the whole kingdom even the bad things. When I put on the outfit it fit me perfectly I came out of the bathroom and went over to Alice.
“Man you were in there for a long time”
“Really it didn’t feel like it”
“Oh yeh I forgot to tell you in wonder land time fly’s by fast even when you’re not having fun”
“Of course I just knew there would be a catch”
“Yeh there usually is any way what were you doing in there”
“Oh nothing”
“All right were going to go to the kitchen and pack some snacks first then we are going to start the tour”
When we were in the kitchen the queen was there we walked up to her.
“Hello girls, Kailey I see the outfit fits you”
“Yes very well to”
“Well that’s good, know I want you girls to pack some snacks and then be on with it you won’t be back until late tonight.
That night went bye very fast before I knew it, it was already the morning of the second day. I found myself in a giant cage. I got up and looked around
“Wait I know this place I’m… I’m in the red castle”
“Yes you are”
“Who said that?”
“No one you need to know”
“Please let me go let me goooooooooooooooo”
Then all of a sudden someone came in my room and woke me up
“What’s wrong what’s wrong?”
“Oh I must have had a bad dream”
“I don’t think so bad dreams don’t exist in wonder land”
“What get away from me then go away I want to go home I want to go home”
“I’m just fooling with you but if that’s what you wish then you can go home”
Alice pulled off a mask
“No, no please I want to stay here”
“Ok but we won’t get to do much”
“Why not”
“when we went on the tour you ate all your food and mine well I eat some of mine to but anyway we ran out of food and we stopped in a garden and some berries there are magical they can do powerful things you grabbed some berries and started eating them you dropped down dead, don’t worry you weren’t dead, dead but you fell into a deep sleep and you have been asleep for 1 hole week and 3 days”
“That means I only have 4 more days”
She nodded
“Ok well lets have as much fun as possible than ok”. I said
All that day we went horseback riding swimming with weird creatures and I rode her dog all by myself I had so much fun that day.in the morning me and Alice meet in the kitchen.
“Now what I had planned for today was that I might teach you how to fight”
“So cool”
“I know that you wanted to have fun but this is so much fun especially when you know how you can challenge all the boys at your school to a fight”
“That’s awesome I would have never thought I would be able to do that” “well you might be able to”
“Well let’s go common”
All that day I spent time learning practicing and listing to Alice who was teaching me how to fight.at the end of the day she came to me
“That was so much fun today, I haven’t had this much fun in a long time”
“You haven’t what have you been doing”
“Nothing I’ve had nothing to do ever since I killed the jaberwakie”
“Oh I’m so sorry”
“Don’t let that get in your way please”
“I won’t’”
For the other two days I was there I and Alice built a huge tree house fort and when it was time to go I took an hour to leave.
The end
I would like to go never land. When you walk in to the never land door you see kids and if you are a kid you will stay a kid. I will like to meet the fairies and tinker bell and you get to fight hook and his crews and you will get to live a tree house.
When I walked in the door I seen hook fighting peter pen and hooks crew was fighting the kids. I ran to the fight and grabbed something to help fight Hook’s crew. It was a sword. The kids said who is that kid and I said I`m Ty Deleeuw. So we started fighting. The pirates said we give up they’re too quick for us. Then no you’re not going any were. But the pirates jumped off the ship. So hook jumped off too. I was talk to the kids and I said what you do you do around here the kids said whatever we want. We hunt, play games, sport and we swing on the trees. I want to come hunting with you can I come. The kids took me somewhere to hunt deer on are hunt I seen something running. I said what that running the kids look and said that’s a deer. Chase after it. We ran after it. The kid grab the and throw it down and killed. As soon as I got to the deer the deer was dead. I help bring the deer back to never land. As soon as we got peter pen came got me and this kid help us deer so I`m going to a give a sword . I said thank you. I`m going to go home know.
My Wonderland
I was still going after the rabbit when I saw the 7 doors all with different names. There was Narnia, Neverland, Hogwarts, Camelot, Middle Earth, Westeros and Wonderland. I decide to go with the white rabbit; I knew he would go to Wonderland, and my curiosity got the best of me so I went after him. But when I opened the door I fell a hundred meters from the ground. Just before I hit a mysterious blue explosion happened and I was now wearing a blue dress with a white apron, black and white stripped long socks and a lucky horseshoe charm my mother got me and my 15 birthday. Though in a daze, I knew I had to go home before something bad happened. Along my walk to confront the mad hatter to help me go home, I find a very skinny and devious cat appears in front of my eyes. I recognized that mischievous blood stained grin. `Chesy! You crazy cat! What are you doing? I’ve got to find the Hatter so he can help me go home!’ I explain with anger. `How can he help you if he can’t even help himself?’ he said in a low vicious growl like voice. `If you find him you should first help him get himself back together before he helps you get back home.’ Then with a brilliant golden glow he disappears. I see a large house and a dinosaur with the blade wedged in its spine. I take it out eagerly, I smile, the Vortex Blade. With the power of an army, the swiftness of a bird and the grace of the most skilled ballerina. With a devious grin of my own I walk toward the house to only knock on the door. `This house is so familiar’ I think to myself. When a large woman 2 times taller than me opens the door. I stare in horror, the Duchess. ` Well Alice are you going to stand looking like TweedleDumb all day or are you going to come in?’ `Why should I? You want to eat me.’` I’ve grown past that. You girls are extremely fattening. Now I eat boiled PIG SNOUTS. Speaking of Pig Snouts can you go find some for me? I’ve got to keep an eye on my soup. There usually flying around Wonderland. There’s a magic pepper grinder to kill your enemies and it make those delightful piggy’s sneeze teleporting them back here. ’ She said in a sweet like voice. Almost exactly like my mothers. I grabbed the pepper grinder and walk out the back door. I walked for about 5 minutes then I saw and oversized bottle pouring a waterfall of purple liquid. I read the tag near where the cap went. ` Shrinking potion’ `I know you have no proper bathing attire but a plunge in that pool is in order.’ I jumped at those words and turned around. `Chesy! You scared me! Where did you come from?’ ` Here, there, everywhere.’ He replied trying to look like a saint, but I know better. Reluctantly I jumped down into the shrinking shower. `Im shrinking in this potion! Shall I disappear?’ `Almost, while shrunk you can go places you couldn’t go before and see things you couldn’t see.’ I grew again and sighed, off with my journey. I came across a bunch of giant mushrooms. I jumped across them to the edge of a giant table. As I pulled myself up I thought I saw a little girl in a white dress with red hair and a teddy bear running. Who was that? I shrugged and continued on. If you want me to continue please comment
Good job chackie. I like your story, but if I were to do a story in a big city like this, I would have included something with the Statue of Liberty, or the Jumbo Tron screen downtown. It is still really good though. 🙂
Chackiee, I liked your story, what if SpiderMan was going against you? who would win? Maybe you could’ve added more charactors. Overall, you did well, I liked how there was a lot of action.
I would go to wonderland because there is talking bunnies, teleporting cats and there are crazy people.
STORY
When I walked through the door the first thing I saw was a man he reminded me of a clown .he had white hair and purple cloths and has red hair. He asked me if I was lost I said “no” then I walk down the road and ran in to a cat he said “why I look so sad” I said “I’m not sad I am bored I just ran in to a guy how look like he was from the 1960” “O that’s the tea man” he said I tried to walk away from him and then he came in my face
Seven doors
I went through the door to wonderland.
I choose this door because I have always wanted to go to wonderland.
It was a normal boring day so I decided to go for a walk in the woods. I decided to take an usual root I have never taken before. As I was walking down the path I noticed a sing. The sing was pointing towards seven doors. Seven doors in the middle of nowhere. I stood there for at least two minutes just staring at them they had writing on the top of the doors. I noticed that one of the doors said wonderland. I was so excited I have always wanted to go to wonderland. I wasn’t even thinking I walked right through the door and I was falling I was falling down a hole I looked and I saw cards and dirt all around. I finally hit the ground and I started walking around looking at all the different plants. There was a trail so I took it ad I found a rabbit with a stop watch and glasses. He looked down at his stop watch and was yelling “ I’m late I’m late I’m very very late”. But I noticed he had dropped his stop watch and then I chased the rabbit all the way to the castle. I walked up to the rabbit giving him his stop watch and he was very thankful for that. He asked how I had gotten here and I was telling him how I was walking outside and found seven doors and went through the one that said wonderland. He said to me I made a very bad choice and that if the red queen I found out I was in wonderland. He told me to get out as quick as I could. So I was running back away from the castle and I saw a cat in the tree. I asked the cat how to get out of here and get back to the doors. The cat told me to follow the yellow flowers. So I did as he told me and I was running the whole way back. I finally found the door and I opened it up and went home. My boring day wasn’t that boring after all.
The 7 Doors
Out of the seven doors, I would definitely choose Hogwarts, because I have the best connection. I know more about this school than any of the other seven doors, so it would make a better adventure. This is where my story begins. I am in a dark, black room, only one thing bright, momentarily blinding me. A single door off to my left with nothing on it is shining in the blackness. I cautiously walk over to it, knowing that possibly anything could happen. Nothing does thought, and slowly I reach the door. Once I am inches from it, so close that if I stretch out my fingers, I could probably touch it, I would say the door is about seven feet high, and wide enough that two of me could slide though at the same time. Slowly, I open the door, wondering what could happen, when at all at once it hits me. I see everything. Instantly I know where I am. Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. I can’t believe my eyes. Looking down, I see my clothes have magically changed into black formal-looking school robes. On the right side of my robes, a badger is emblazoned onto blue and grey badge. A definite Ravenclaw. Looking around, I am a huge hall, crowded with school age students, all wearing the same black robes and colorful badges. I am in the Great Hall! I follow a Spanish-looking girl with the same Ravenclaw badge as me to the farthest left table. It is gloriously large enough to easily fit a hundred people. Looking up I see the ceiling is magically changing from something I haven’t seen to a dark navy sky, sprinkled with twinkling stars. All the decorations are beautiful. So magnificently beautiful I can’t describe it, though they are most definitely elf-made, by the looks of sheer perfection on absolutely everything. Suddenly, everyone is quiet. Nothing moves, or makes a sound, absolute silence. I look up the teachers table, and see that Dumbledore is about to start his speech. He is probably going to introduce a new teacher, preferably filling the Defense against the Dark Arts profession. I was half right. “Good evening ladies and gentlemen. May I say welcome to our new students, and welcome back to our older ones. I know you are very hungry from your long day of travel, so I will keep you in suspense for a little while longer. The only thing I would like to say is please give a warm welcome to our newest professor, in the charms department, Professor Evanesco! She will be our covering for the late Professor Flitwick, who has passed away last summer, of what I believe to be old age. With that being all, your feast!” And with that, Dumbledore clapped his hands, and a magnificent feast appeared. On the golden plates, goblets and platters, food and drink appeared. Everything you could imagine. There was turkey, ham, chicken, steak, potatoes, veggies, bread and butter, and almost everything else you could imagine. Everybody stuffed their faces and piled their plates high, putting them in danger of falling food towers. We ate and ate, until we were stuffed, and the last crumbs of breaded faded, and dessert replaced it. There were treacle tarts, pies, cakes, cookies, tarts, frozen treats and delicacies. It was magnificent. At the end of the night, when everybody was full to bursting, and very sleepy, Dumbledore announced that it was time for bed. Slowly we got up and stumbled, sleep-driven, towards our towers and common rooms. At the top of the northwest tower, there is a painting of a very handsome hazel-eyed knight. He let us in, and I stumbled off to the girl’s room. I fumble around, looking for my suitcase, and look inside. There are spell books, potion ingredients, scales and on the window sill, and beautiful chocolate brown owl. I decide to name her Jayde, because of her startlingly green eyes. I find my wand, with a tag saying “cherry and unicorn hair”. Ollivander’s mark is written on it. I have my own wand! More tired than I realized, I pull on my pajamas, and practically drop into bed. I fall asleep almost instantly. What an adventure of my first day at Hogwarts!
Narnia
I would want to go to Narnia. I can see it now…..
I walk toward the closet door. I open it hearing it creak. I look in and see a different world. The world has tall light green bushes taller than me. I see a pink and baby blue castle in the distance. It looks graceful. I see little animals everywhere and a talking lion. The lion came up and said “Follow me princess”. I followed the lion on a yellow path. The path was a light yellow with light blue lines. After a long walk we reach a castle, the bright pink and baby blue one. I walk in seeing a lot of jewels. I see a king and queen with a prince. I walk over and the queen lays a crown on my head. It was a bright gold crown with blue and pink jewels. Suddenly a bright blue dress appears on me. I have light pink makeup on my face and my hair is in a bun. I smile wide as the prince holds my hand. Suddenly I see a red and black dragon burst though the walls and take the talking lion. I scream in terror while it roars loudly. It flies out. I run out the way it flew out and see a dark black castle in the distance. I see the dragon land on top of the castle. I see it turn into a human. It’s the wicked witch. She is the evil queen that ruins everyone’s life. I never want to go there but I have to save the lion. I grab a sword from the castle wall and run out. I look at the sword; it is silver with a golden handle. It sparkle’s a bright sparkle at the top. I see a dark red path guessing it goes to the evil queen’s castle. The prince stops me and says “I’m coming with you”. We start running on the dark black path and I feel fear in my veins. We come up to the dark black castle doors. I back up a few steps. The prince holds my hand and says “We’ll do this together”. I hold his hand, we slowly open the door and I hear it creak open. When I open it my whole life flashes before my eyes. My dress turns into a dark black and red dress that is up to my feet. My hair comes out of my bun and turns into a long strait pony tail. My crown disappears and I have dark black makeup and dark red lipstick. I look at the lion and he has chains on his paws and the chains are chained to the ground. I look at my sword and see that the blade turned into a blood red color and the handle turns into a dark black color. I grab it out of my sword holder. I look for the queen and can’t see her anywhere. Then I see the dark queen dressed in all back looking straight at me. I point the sword at her thinking she’ll get scared. She doesn’t move. I see her spin move while she transforms to a dragon. I see her head jolt up so I run to the lion. I see the chains have a key hole. I see keys on the wall at the other end. I run as fast as my legs can go and grab the keys. I run back to the dragon. I unlock him and he whispers “You have a bolting power, say this spell then point your hands at the target the say it again, a bolt of lightning will shot out of your hands. BUT you have to believe.” I nod as the lion gives me the paper with the spell on it. I say the spell “From man to wizard, from bunny to talking lions, I declare this spell for putting you down. LIGHTNING BOLT ATTACK!” I point my hands at her. I hear the queen say “NO!! Please!!” I say the spell again “From man to wizard, from bunny to talking lions, I declare this spell for putting you down. LIGHTNING BOLT ATTACK!”. After I said that I see a lightning bolt shoot out of my hands. It hits the queen and kills her knocking her backwards on her back. I see her turn into dust. I grab the sword and the paper with the spell on it. The lion says “jump on my back I’ll take you to the nice castle.” I jump on his back and he runs faster that a cheetah to the castle. We were there in 3o seconds. I ran in seeing my blue dress appear again and seeing my crown return on top of my head. I notice my light pink makeup return on my face and feel my hair go back in to a bun. The queen and king come over to me and hug me tightly. “We will really miss you Julia”, says the queen. “Dearly”, says the king right after her. I smile as I take my crown off. “No, No, keep it dear you’ve been a huge help.” I smile as I say “thank you mother and father.” I put the crown and walk off to my real world door. The prince walks beside me and the lion walks with me to. When I get to the door I turn to the prince. “I will miss you dearly”, says the prince. “I will miss you too”, I say back. The prince bends down and kisses my hand. I kiss his cheek. I look at the lion. “You saved me from the wicked witch, thank you”, says the lion. “My pleasure”, I replied. “Good bye my friends, I will miss you all”, I say calmly. I open the door and walk in feeling a blast of cold air on my face. I see my clothing change to my maid outfit and my hair in a curly pony tail. I smile and say “I’m back from Narnia my friends, I’m back…”
I close my eyes. I was ready to go to bed, but suddenly I was somewhere. It was so brown, there was a closet and three brown doors. There were two yellow doors. Also a door that had a question mark on it. I came closer to that door and I could see a yellow note close by the question mark. I took the note and started reading it. It’s said “Which door will you pick? Will you ever come back?” I was thinking if this was a dream I kept blinking and I never woken up.
I open the door and I could feel the cold air coming towards me. What was this place? I thought. I came closer inside the door and I didn’t know what to do. Should I jump? I kept thinking but then suddenly I just jumped. As the cold air and the dust came towards me. Where was I going? I couldn’t think and everything was gone I didn’t remember why I jumped. I was like a new person. I entered a small brown house. There was a desk that had some tools and needles. I couldn’t recognize this place. I walked towards the crack dusty window. I could see a mansion and a graveyard. The grass was so old it was brown and the dirt was so dry. While I sit on this dusty chair, thinking what should I do next? Then suddenly I was erupted by this dark brown hair girl. She was wearing a dress and had sandals on. As she came towards me she shouted saying “Who are you? Why are u in Shadow Grove? How did you come here? As she kept asking me question. I couldn’t remember why I went here everything was gone but expect the brown question mark door. I told her about “the door also saying I lost my memory and I couldn’t answer her questions “
While she grabbed my hand and she went in front of the house. We started running and she told me “you were in the slave house, you could be sick any time if you kept staying there. Good I came to save you” She gave me a signal to “stay here”. I looked at the window and I could see my reflection I was somebody else. I was a boy. Dark brown hair, blue t-shirt and dark blue jeans. She called me “Dave come here but be very quiet.” She grabbed my hand and took me to her dark purple room. She kept talking to me about shadow grove. She brought me a cold Ice tea and she also told me that “I could stay for the night, you better go take a shower.” I went inside the gold shower I took my clothes off and I start cleaning myself. While I was inside the shower I could hear a woman calling somebody “Nore, Josie and gabe its lunch time!” I stopped the shower and I walked towards a door that a boy just left. I took some of his clothes and I started putting it on. As a brown and blonde girl came to the door “Dave what are you doing here… I thought you were going to your sister party?” I had a sister I thought. “Well I wanted to see you “I said with a smile.
She looked at my clothes and said “isn’t that Gabe clothes?” I just didn’t reply and I walked away to the hall and took the stair. Before I even took one step a girl said “its Josie doesn’t even go down there my maman will be mad!” I looked outside the window and I could see a dark brown hair boy. It looked like me. I looked behind me and I could see their smiles on their faces. I had to tell them and I just did “I’m not the real Dave, I came from the seven doors and the real one is outside” As I see their faces with shock and they told me “How could you do that to us?! I let you stay for two nights” I didn’t reply and I told her to push me off this balcony but she didn’t. “Just blink and you will be gone” As I looked at my hand I could see the watch in my hand. But Josie came running towards but I just blinked and Josie could never get the watch back. Finally got up. I was free from that place! I looked at my hand and I could see the watch with a small note on it saying “congratulations you got my watch –Josie”
Camelot
As I walk through the forest behind my house, I come across seven completely random doors. They each have different words engraved into them. The words were Hogwarts, Camelot, Wonderland, Middle Earth, Westeros, and Never Land. As soon as I saw these doors I remembered what my mother had always said about these doors. If you ever come across these exact seven doors, they will lead you to whatever world is listed on the front of the door. I chose to go through the door to Camelot. It was my favorite story as a lid, and I had always wanted to be, or meet a princess. On this door, Camelot was written with Calligraphy, and the door itself looked old and wooden with rusty metal hinges and handle. I reached for the handle and opened the door. I was surprised it was unlocked. When I opened it, it squeaked like the beginning of Michael Jacksons Thriller. Unable to resist, I swung the door open with my entire mite. I stepped in, and the door closed behind me. Everywhere I looked there was nothing. It was just really bright. As I walked forward, my senses woke up. I heard the distinct clip-clop of horse hooves. It smelt and tasted dry and sandy. And what I saw was the most amazing. Right in my view, still a bit in front of me, there was a huge castle, about 8 stories high, with guards surrounding the perimeter. I came up to a puddle, and almost fainted. I looked nothing like myself. My blonde hair, sunglasses, and braces were gone; along with my flowy neon pink tank top and dogtooth print pleated mini skirt. It was all replaced with what was now copper, brown hair in nice beach waves, hazel eyes, and a big dress. The dress was big and poufy, a deep purple color. On my feet, I had on neon pink all-star high-tops. I was now tall and skinny. I didn’t like the amount of mascara. It was brushed on heavily, and looked hideous. My freckles, lips, and cheeks were okay, but there wasn’t anything I could do about it. I walked up to a guard. I said hello a few times, and there was no answer. I tapped on his mask and opened it up, two big bright blue eyes glaring at me. He whistled and four men carrying a seat on a piece of wood with four sticks coming out the ends to carry it came rushing towards us. They picked me up, put me on the seat and hurried me inside. A person in an immaculate outfit, and cape came out. I assume he was a king. He started talking to me. I trailed off admiring the beauty of the stain glass, marble, and other beautiful decorations. I only heard the last bit which was “your room is on the fourth floor. There are clothes supplied, and an extra change of sheets. There will also be a bunch of pillows, so you can choose which one you want, and a list of what you have to do tomorrow. I walked to my room without the other guards now. I opened up the big doors, to find a big king size bed with purple and blue ombre sheets, and a balcony. I didn’t even notice the big walk in closets. The walls were light lavender too. I went to bed (it was really late). When I woke up in the morning, I saw a list of stuff.
It read:
• 10:30-wake up
• 11:05- breakfast/brunch
• 12:00-12:35-free time
• 12:35-1:00-dress fitting
• 1:00-2:30-meeting with town council
• 2:30-3:45-farmers complaint meeting
• 3:45-4:10-break
• 4:10-5:30-Inspect servants work
• 5:30-6:05-nap
• 6:05-6:25-supper prep.( clothing, makeup, etc.)
• 6:25-6:30- wait at table
• 6:30-7:30- supper
• 7:30-9:00-meeting
• 9:00-10:45- spa
• 10:45-11:00-get ready and go to bed
Wow! That is really busy. I had always thought that princesses could just do whatever they wanted. It turns out I was completely wrong.
Later
It was almost supper, and I didn’t think I would be able to walk to the table. I was so tired. I had had a really busy day that was stressful and had lots of meetings. I eventually made it to the table. Luckily, supper was something I liked. There was shrimp with cocktail sauce, Caesar salad, black salmon, and for dessert, a baked Alaska, with a scoop of after eight ice-creams, and a scoop of peanut butter ice-cream. Once I was finished I went to the spa, and then straight to bed. I woke up at 6:00 the next morning, hoping that no one else was up. I changed into new clothes, and ran out the front door of the castle as fast as I could in the direction of the door I came in. I saw it after what seemed like forever of running. I threw it open entered, and closed it behind me. I had definitely experienced what I had always wanted to, although it didn’t turn out like I wanted it to. I now knew that it was one thing off my “Impossible bucket list.” I may not have liked it, but that’s how it worked. Now I went back to my house, keeping my experience a secret until I was ready to reveal it. I knew I would never forget this moment.
ben you did a good job but you should add more rising actions to your work. good job ben 🙂
The seven doors
I would pick middle earth because there are dwarfs and hobbits. Plus I would want to meet the people in the book. Plus I want to meet some of the creatures in there.
As I walked in a forest cabin into a room a voice said I can go to Narnia, never land, wonderland, Hogwarts, Camelot, middle earth, westeros. Then when I was choosing which door I chose middle earth. As I walked through the door I was falling down very far them boom I was out cold. As I woke up I saw all the characters in the book was standing beside me then Gandalf said “are you ok? You had quite a fall. Then I replied “yeah I think so” then they introduced their names. Then the fellowship and I was walking down the road and we were on our journey. Then while we were walking down the road we saw orcs! I was going to run away but Gandalf said “if you run you would be killed” “ok I will stay with you” I said in fear then I heard the orcs boss say “I see them over there!” “Run!” Gandalf said with fear as we were running “get them!” the orcs boss said. As were running they were shooting arrows at us them Gandalf said “you shall not pass!”
Then boom! Gandalf used his staff to scare of the orcs. Then the orcs never bothered us again then as were were walking Gandalf told me about all his journeys then I went back to where I fell then zzzttt I was back in the cabin.
The seven doors
I would actually not choose to go through any doors other than the exit door. I would then go to Australia, because the country is really nice and I want to go scuba diving by the Great Barrier Reef. The next thing I would do is go to the plains and look for kangaroos, then go to the jungle and get a pet koala. When I walk through the door I would be greeted by someone saying “good day mate!” my trip wouldn’t be all good though, because one of the wild kangaroos would chase after us and not turn back. Even though we did not take it with us, we got charged and thrown in jail. While in jail our lives are pretty boring. Same old every day, until the second last day there. Then a dog ran into my jail cell and started sniffing around under my bed and found a stash of million dollar gold nuggets. We then cashed it in and were multi billionaires. When were released, we decided we didn’t want to go back to Canada, so we had to live there and have a good time.. It would all turn out that we live there forever, and have good lives.
The Door I chose was Wonderland. The different kind of animals and friends I made. Almost everything was alive for their own reason. There were potions for getting big, small, and some just for eating; they were decorated with bunch of sprinkles and handwritten words that I couldn’t really read. Wonderland was a great place to stay and discover. The door knob was big and round, too big for my hands. The little baked potion was hiding under the table in a wooden box. That made me curious. I didn’t know if I should eat it or what. I kept thinking “what if I get food poisoning?” So I just took a crumb for the cakester and tasted it. It had a sweet, sugary, kind of taste. I felt my clothes shrinking down to size. My hair was getting longer and thicker from the looks of it. The door knob was just any other door knob I seen before, small and round. As i opened the door, a creaky sound was occuring, the sun was extremely bright. I had to hold my clothes in place. The plants were all around me, neon colored. It was very bright. It took a while for my eyes to adjust. I saw two pairs of blue eyes staring at me from the plants. They were stepping out slowly and I realized from the story and movie, it was Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dumb. They were so chubby and short! They introduced themselves, after that, we decided to go get some clothes at a shopping centre. I picked my size quickly because they told me they were in a rush. I wonder why. I took five minutes and off we went. I kept asking “why are you guys in a rush?” They had no answer to give me. As we kept walking, I heard a bell like sound. They told me that we were headed for the “hatteh.” The way they say words are so cute! I couldn’t help but giggle. From the corner of my eye, I could see one of them have a little smirk on their face. I really felt like they cared for me. The sound was growing with every step. I could see a far end of a long table and tea cups everywhere. The green eyes of the Hatter widened and filled with surprise. I was taller than him because of that cakester I had earlier. He came running and pushing my back to the exact way we came. To the door. I saw some guards heading our way. The Hatter was mumbling but I couldn’t quite understand. All of a sudden, I felt my clothes get bigger as I knew I was shrinking back down to size. The twins were trying to catch up but having a little trouble. We were almost there, back to the door. I was struggling to make him let go of me, but his muscles and strength were too strong. I asked him, “Why are you taking me back?” He replied, “Because it’s too dangerous here, you don’t know the possibilities that could happen if you stay too long.” I tried to give him the puppy dog face which always seemed to work when I did it, but Hatter was different I guess, he sort of glanced and smirked at me as if to say “That not going to work on me.” There it was the door. The Hatter said his apologies and he disappeared. Things got awkward once he left. It was so quiet. We said our goodbyes and once I closed the door behind me, it was gone. Maybe all of this was just a dream.
NeverLand
I would go through the door that goes to NeverLand because I wouldn’t have to have any responsibilities and I stay young forever. When I went through the door there was a jolt of heat from the hot sun. I walked down the path and there was a mist from the viny jungle. Monkeys were flying from tree to tree, lizards where running up trees. Then I heard this roaring sound it was a waterfall down the path. So I walked down the path there was a 300 foot cliff with gushing water off of it. But I continued on the path but then I heard a pirate it was hook he was shooting cannon balls right for my head.
One by one he was firing them I disappeared into speed down the path into the forest. Hook hit the shore and bolted for me, I pulled out my sword hook did also. I and hook fought for a while and then I got the chance and I stab hook in the guts then he dropped to his knees. Now there is nothing bad in NeverLand.
THE END
I would go to middle earth because I would want to meet Smeagol, Frodo or Gandalf. I would step through the door and end up in the shire I would walk up to Frodo Baggins hobbit hole and knock on the door. He is not home so I leave the shire and head to the mines of Moria and when I get there Gandalf had just open the door and the monster had just started to attack them and in all the commotion I slipped through the door just before it closed. I slowly followed them and then orcs showed up so I left the group and ran until I found the most peculiar creature that kept babbling on about a precious and also saying Gollum allot. He was very old practically like 500 years old he left in a hurry he was focused on something that Frodo was carrying. I thought that this had been a long day so I headed back to the shire and stepped back through the door and went home.
I chose the door that had minecraft written on the top of it. I had chose this door because it was very interesting and I could hear stuff inside of it which just made me want to go in it even more. And I had read the description sign beside it said “once you enter this world you will turn into a minecraft character named Steve and your body will turn into blocks you must find wood to make a house once you have died in this world you teleport back into your own world. There will be monsters to make your journey even harder in this world you must be careful and don’t look an Enderman in the eye or it will teleport to you and kill you.” Once I had read that I walked in and my new life as Steve began.
My story
As I stepped into the door that leads to the Minecraft world I could feel my arms and legs turn into a block shape and I seen some trees so I went and broke them with my bare hand and made some wooden planks for my house because I noticed it was getting dark. I made a small house just for one night but I didn’t kill any sheep for wool to make a bed so I stayed up all night. The next morning when I woke up I went outside to get more wood to make a bigger house and I seen some sheep up the hill so I sprinted there trying to go my fastest. When I got up the hill I hit the sheep until it died. Finally after 5 hits to the head it died so I took the wool from it but I still needed to kill 2 more sheep to make a bed. I made my house that could fit 8 people in it but I still needed to make a pickaxe so I made I crafting table and made a wooden one for now so I dug down and got some stone to make a stone pickaxe as I went in to house I saw a zombie in it so I went in the and bashed him in the head a few times and he died so I made a stone pickaxe to get some iron to make an iron pickaxe to get diamonds so I got some but when I dug down I fell into a huge cave that led me to diamonds and I got 19 pieces but I still had to find my way back home and I had to fight my way through monsters for 20 minutes. I had finally found my house when I got in it I had made a bed. But before I went to sleep I looked out my window and I looked at an Enderman in the eye and it teleported inside my house and killed me. And that was the end of Steve.
If I were in front of seven doors I would chose to go through the one that leads to wonderland. I would choose this door because it is more of an adventure.
As I entered this door I walked one step and fell down a rabbit hole, when I landed I saw talking flowers and a little rabbit looking at his watch and rushing so I called out for him and started to follow him. He led me to and little door, but I was too big to fit through it and the key to this door was on the giant table, so I had to eat a cake that made me grow, once I had the key in my hand I saw a little bottle of potion that made me little. When I unlocked the door I went through it and continued following the little rabbit, I came upon a long table with tea and food on it, I was hungry so I sat down to eat. A guy came out and sat down too, he introduced himself as the mad hatter and told me where to go next. The mad hatter told me to go through a dark forest that will lead me to the queen of hearts castle. I was about half way through the forest when I heard a noise and saw a shadow. A disappearing Cheshire cat popped out at me and started talking. when I came upon the queens castle I saw her workers painting the roses red, I snuck into the back of the castle and the queen caught me and told me in order for me to continue walking I had to play croquet, so I did and she used a hedgehog as the ball and flamingos as the stick, as I was playing the game against the queen I saw the rabbit in the queens croquet yard, the rabbit was late for a game against the queen.
I came upon 7 one day and I chose to go through the door that lead to Narnia. As soon as I entered the door I seen a land that was white, covered in snow. I felt little drops of snow fall down on me that made my spine shiver. It was beautiful. Suddenly I heard noises near the trees and I decided to follow them, as I got closer and closer to the noise I seen little hooves. I yelled out hello and answered back was a quiet human voice saying hey. We walked toward each other and there standing in front of me was a half human half horse. It was incredible; I’ve never seen anything like that before. We got to talking and he invited me to his home for some tea and biscuits, I said sure. Half an hour later as I was just finishing up I explained to him that it was getting late and I must get back home before my family gets worried. He walked me out and we said our goodbyes. I walked through the forest until I saw my door again I entered it and came back to my normal old house. I found my brothers and sister and excitedly tried to explain my adventure with them but they didn’t believe me so I guess tomorrow I’ll just have to show them. I couldn’t wait to get back. The end
I’m not picking any of these doors. I am going to pick the door through New York to find Spiderman. When I stepped through the door to New York to find Spiderman I found out that it’s chaotic because there so many bad guys and only Spiderman can stop them. I search Spiderman in new York I ask some people if the know Spiderman until they bring me to his house I knock to the door then someone open the door then I ask him if he know where’s peter parker (Spiderman) then he say the “He leave’s this house a long time ago I think he moves to 99th street “then I go to 99th street then ask some people if they know where peter parker lives then they bring me there I knock at his door the door opened then finally its peter parker then I say to him “hello Mr. parker I’m Chackie I want to help you stop the bad guys in the first day he said to me that he need to train me but suddenly a bad guy comes out its one of Dr.Lizard’s army! Then Spidey fires a web to him then he punch him then kick him in the face KNOCK OUT! I feel happy to see him again fighting. The training is over I’m ready to kill some bad guys first we go on top of the tower to find some bad guys I saw somebody robbing some jewelry at the jewelry store then I say “Spidey over there!’ I point at the jewelry store then he say “let’s go but remember GREAT POWER COMES GREAT RESPONSIBILTY” then we jumped and go to the jewelry store Spidey wrapped the robber with his spider web then he said “it’s your turn Chackie!’ I punch the robber in the face then kick him in the stomach KNOCK OUT!” we bring the bad guy at the New York Police Department then we both say “chief here’s something for you” months and months ago i decided to go back to High Level I packed my things then go to Spidey then say “spidey I think I have to go it’s a pleasure for being a part of your alliance” then he say “okay thanks Chackie for helping me to stop the bad guys” then I walk through the door going back to high level I look back to him then smile when I get back to High Level I saw a strange present I opened it “it’s a Spiderman costume!” I look up the air just wandering if he’s there but he’s not there I wear and say “GREAT POWER COMES GREAT RESPONSIBILTY”.